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Giving more details to the described main event=✅️
Using "that" after the definition so you can have more verbs and therefore a deeper prologue in which it contains a clear "statement" for the main idea=✅️
"Stumbles upon" did really fit well with the epologue as it created a "between-area" that has mentioned the treasure and the uncharted planet in a well written way.