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evelyn832

Hi there,I recently discovered your story and thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The strong visual moments and engaging plot make it a great candidate for a comic adaptation.As an experienced freelance artist, I specialize in creating artwork that helps stories connect with readers on a deeper level. I'd be delighted to discuss bringing your project into comic form.You can reach me on Disc0rd (evelyn_richie) if you'd like to chat.Kind regards,Evelyn

9 hours agoReply

venomSketch

The staccato repetition of Gone seven times followed by Don't fall four times captures the chaos and grief of losing someone in a nuclear blast perfectly. well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
Here are my all other platforms: Twitter: WinterKatie3 Insta: winterkatie687 Email: [email protected] Discord: winterkatie

2 days agoReply

Elsaa_dean

I loved the way your story unfolds. The emotional depth and structure made it feel very engaging, almost cinematic at times.
I’m someone who enjoys both reading and visual storytelling, and your work really stood out to me. If you’re open to chatting on insta about creative ideas someday, I’d love that.

4 months agoReply

Josephine

I really liked how the story shifts so quickly from a peaceful, almost cinematic moment in Paris. What inspired you to write such a sudden and dramatic turn from beauty to destruction in this piece?

8 months agoReply

L. Nessie Coeur

Hello! Thank you for your kind words. If I’m being honest, this was definitely inspired by real world events, and my own life. The second one is definitely a bit more of the struggles of the mind, while the first shows through in most of the events. I am sorry that the next chapter isn’t up yet, but I blame my perfectionist tendencies. My rough drafts feel more like thirds sometimes!

8 months agoReply

Josephine

@L. Nessie Coeur, Awesome! Do you happen to have Discord? I’d love to chat more over there.

8 months agoReply

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