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Ariana45

Your writing has a really nice flow. It was easy to get lost in the story.

3 hours agoReply

venomSketch

The shift from a peaceful Italian morning to the chase down cobbled streets is so abrupt, and the detail of the wet dog smell suggesting the bump was intentional adds a layer of unease - then he just vanishes in a dead-end alley.
well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
Here are my all other platforms: Twitter: WinterKatie3 Insta: winterkatie687 Email: [email protected] Discord: winterkatie

4 hours agoReply

Mick

Great opening that instantly grabbed my attention.

6 hours agoReply

MARIII

Loved your story! The world and characters are easy to imagine, which is why I think it would translate beautifully into a manga or webtoon. It could be a great way to attract more readers.
I'm a commission-based artist with experience creating manga/webtoon artwork and related projects. I’ve worked on similar pieces before, and I’d be happy to share my portfolio if you're interested. reach out at:akiracomicart2@[email protected] if interested.

1 day agoReply

Sarahh1h

Your writing has a very distinct atmosphere. It made me wonder if there's a particular book, movie, game, or even a piece of music that influenced this story while you were writing it

1 day agoReply

Aurora Jayne

I draw inspiration from many movies and songs but only inspiration I like all the ideas but I manage to entirely change them and create my own, I quite often add anecdotes from songs which sometimes even just happen on their own without me purposely adding them in. But story's can never fully be original as there are many books in the world so you can never be too sure if someone has already written it and so you can just hope and let your imagination run wild and so in that in its own way it is unique

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