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Moonlit_irina
The part where Liu Yeqing just WAITS for Lin Hao to overcommit and then uses his own force to throw him down absolutely sent me. She was never running away, she was setting a trap the whole time and that reveal hit so well. The writing made me feel every single step. This story has me completely hooked. :))
8 hours agoReply
墨消然
Thank you so much! I’m really happy you noticed that part.
Yes, Liu Yeqing wasn’t just running away. She was waiting for Lin Hao to overcommit, then turning his own force against him. I wanted that fight to feel like a battle of timing, footwork, and understanding, not just power.
Your comment really encourages me. I’ll keep working hard on the story!
7 hours agoReply
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