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《詩詞散文雜記》
ISSUE #5
Author: 木雚
《詩詞散文雜記》
Author: 木雚
ISSUE #5
《憶江南・雨日悟禪》－－宋詞一闕
No Plagiarism!R00AjrU6hAisN2hQs1oJposted on PＥNAＮＡ

日本最近是梅雨季，如果不開除濕機，室內都很陰濕難受。趁著這個機會寫了一個小品，順便練習填詞。401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbFcuwHJhx1
不得不說，歷經絕句的平仄洗禮之後，宋詞的平仄式樣比較自由一些，寫起來也比較不綁手綁腳，挺有趣的。

《憶江南・雨日悟禪》401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ77scq1BvX9
梅雨日，陰冷意闌姍。蛙叫蟲鳴連數句，喧囂騰鬧甚娛歡，浮世更知禪。

401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB2IhfGEorh

此闕是《憶江南》正格調，平仄如下，歡迎有興趣的朋友也玩看看！

平●仄。句401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa0F88vjwHj
●仄仄平平。韻401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBMuLRA4m6j
●仄●平平仄仄。句401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIcMqYx91Wy
●平●仄仄平平。韻401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTJk9bAPgzc
●仄仄平平。韻

●表自由，平仄皆可。401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6ZD34UKvjJ
最後的句指非韻字，韻表押韻字。

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《詩詞散文雜記》
Poetry
Prose
Short Story
Last updated: Aug 17, 2024
Total word count: 2,206
Total reading time: 7 Minutes
Writer:
木雚
日常 短篇 台灣作家 散文 台灣作者 日記 創作 詩詞 詩 詞
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