2026/06/20（六）
目前在進行高難度改稿。
因為要參加狗勾家的徵文，我必須把２萬４的字，修成８千字，還不能少了重點。
哈哈哈。
我只好把感情戲全刪，只留重點。
也是啦，８千字談什麼感情，只能直接破題了！
目前目修到９千字！
必須再精簡一點，後半段精彩的地方不能修，那只能修一開始，可能要用一整段來帶過才達的到。
改稿，我的功有又上升了！
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茶水間日記第四期
Published:
Jun 20, 2026
ENTRY #2796
【06/20 Day 80 】橘柚日常——改稿
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