東方紅日猛 夕影落徐徐465Please respect copyright.PENANAlhIvPPyzWa
習習籠中鳥 哀哀土上堆465Please respect copyright.PENANABcpEeiLn3f
年輕新血肉 老邁舊身軀465Please respect copyright.PENANADfjbIRMxcb
結果皆相似 生來必變衰465Please respect copyright.PENANAEdpqathgt5
平平平仄仄 仄仄仄平平465Please respect copyright.PENANAp7vS0XNJUm
仄仄平平仄 平平仄仄平465Please respect copyright.PENANAtPe0RwnjRN
平平平仄仄 仄仄仄平平465Please respect copyright.PENANAgI0k76ndih
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註:465Please respect copyright.PENANA1A1Vnzw1m1
[1] 押廣東話 /eoi/ 韻。465Please respect copyright.PENANAbU5e02JWbE
[2] 習習籠中鳥:引自左思《詠史八首.其八》:「習習籠中鳥,舉翮觸四隅。」465Please respect copyright.PENANAkoPDprxmlW
[3] 第廿五次德尼思化創作會嘅主題係「衰果」。465Please respect copyright.PENANATGrCsexasf


